harry brown Posted April 10, 2015 Report Share Posted April 10, 2015 MYSTERIOUS, LIKE THE SEA,EMOTIONS OF THE SOUL//LOVE LIKE THE WAVES AND, TIDES,CALM,STORMY,UPS,DOWNS,WHEN LOVE TAKES HOLD..UPON THE SHORE I WALK ALONE.BACK AND FORTH TO THE SHORE,THE TIDES BRING THE SEA FOAM...ABOVE, GATHERING ARE STORM CLOUDS..FLOCK OF SEAGULLS SOUNDING LOUD...BROWN PELICANS AND BLACK SKIMMER BIRDS CURIOUSLY WANDERING.. BEHIND THEM , MY RESTLESS THOUGHTS, I'M PONDERING...WATCHING THE RESTLESS WAVES UPON THE SEA...MY LOST LOVE LINGERS SHE HAUNTS ME..REMEMBERING THE PASSIONATE EMBRACE, THE WALKS UPON THE BEACH..LOVE'S LOST LONELY AFTERMATH, IS A NEW LOVE BEYOND MY REACH..WAVES RISING HIGHER,HIGHER, AS I STAND...MY SOUL BECOMES DRIFTWOOD,DRIFTING IS THE CURRENTS OF A RESTLESS MAN....A I WALK ALONG THE SHORE ALONE...THE STORMY WIND AS A HAUNTING,LONELY MOAN.../SEEING THE TIDES, HEARING THE OCEAN'S LOUD ROAR....THEN I WALK ALONE,FROM THE LONELY SHORE...//// Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shirley Gale Posted November 11, 2015 Report Share Posted November 11, 2015 Hello Harry, I love the emotional impact that this poem brings. I love poetry that uses the powerful characteristics of our oceans and seas as metaphors for our intense feelings of longing. I would love to see it formatted in stanzas. However, I realize that this is your creative presentation. I really appreciate the content--it's moving. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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