@Troy I understand and appreciate the insight. I am interested in any knowledge you have to share in this process. I understand the science of critique especially one that is followed by solutions. It is always welcomed. Here is a sample of my writing.
Two Days after Bomani’s Funeral
Max Million’s top female killer, the Kenya Moore body double, was found dead in his Harlem stash house. She was strangled with her own pantyhose, naked, and face down with her ass up. Whoever had done it completely dominated her and wanted it to be known. And then for further insult, all the