Guest Dee Miller Posted October 9, 2016 Report Share Posted October 9, 2016 I self published a poetry book titled, The Sun Came out Last Night... Rated D, and am having very little success getting an audience. I'd like to solicit both feedback about my writing and your suggestions on necessary steps in which to promote. Here's an example of one of my poems. Timing is everything when 'No' means 'Yes'. No means yes when he places his lips on the left side of her neck, just below her ear...gently places his hands on the small of her back...and presses her body against his so close that she can hear his every breath...and she tingles from the full body workout. Timing is everything when 'No' means'Yes'. No means yes when shemoans in delight as his tongue gently surveys the inside of her mouth in search of her 'spot' and she submits to the pleasure. Timing is everything when 'No' means 'Yes'. No means yes when he places her body on top of his, and SHE takes control...placing his hands over his head, looks into his eyes and say...'It's time'. Thank you in advance for your feedback and support. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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