Young Writers Need Models
Young writers need models. Early in my apprenticeship my predecessors fed me
greatly. Still, I was also very eager to find work by young black male
contemporaries, which I thought might be more relatable. When I discovered
that Richard Wright published Native son around 32,
James Baldwin Go Tell it
On the Mountain around 29, James Alan McPherson Hue and Cry around 25, then
winning the Pulitzer Prize around 35, and
Jean Toomer Cane around 29, I
thought, surely, there had to be a living young black male fiction writer
whom I could turn to as a model. After a dedicated search, I found none.
There were some young black male writers producing contemporary works of
fiction, but their work seemed determined only to entertain. I was looking
for something more, a deeper, richer perspective. Later, after a more
thorough and committed search, I did find one young black male writer who
seemed to have a deep respect for the art form and the urgent need to try to
get life right on the page. Where were the rest?
Given post Civil Rights era progress and the fact that there were many young
black male poets, I wondered, "Why is there such a lack of young black male
literary fiction writers?" The decline, beginning in the early 1980s, is
striking. For a time, I attributed the shortage to the way of the publishing
industry, specifically the large
New York publishing houses. I reasoned that
during the Harlem Renaissance and the following decades the gatekeepers of
the publishing world were more actively looking for more young black male
voices. The socio-political climate of the times raised the demand for their
perspective. Big publishing houses, and those connected to them, look for
what they think is going to sell well. Writers who appear not to represent
the mainstream benefit from spikes of perceived popular interest. Yet, the
trends of big publishing are not responsible for the halting of young black
male literary voices.
I found the answer after giving a talk at Northern Illinois University. My
audience was a group of young men who were in the university’s "Chance
Program." In an attempt to stress the importance of literacy, I created
audio snippets of rap songs that I knew contained direct references to
books. For example in the song "Some How, Some Way"
Jay-Z says, "Look man, a
tree grows in Brooklyn," which is a direct reference to Betty Smith’s
successful 1943 novel by the same name. Talib Kweli and
Mos Def’s "Thieves
in the Night" pays homage to Toni Morrison’s The Bluest Eye by creating an
entire song inspired by the last paragraphs of the novel. Nas’s "2nd
Childhood", is arguably a reference to a paragraph in Black Boy where
Richard Wright explains his existence in Chicago being like "a second
childhood." Using more examples like these, I explained to the young men
that the best rappers must be highly literate and the mentioning of books in
their lyrics was an overstatement of that fact. After the presentation, I
continued to think about literacy and Hip-Hop artists. I thought about the
songs that I loved, those songs that were vivid and real, which sometimes
took me to a distant place, and at other times, a place of familiarity. The
best Hip-Hop songs, those that told stories, excited me as great scenes from
books did. I came to the conclusion that my favorite MCs were the young
black writers for whom I had been searching.
Many compare rappers to poets. However, I believe they should also be
compared to writers of fiction. Had it not been for the unique set of
circumstances that led to the creation of Hip Hop music, the beats and
rhymes making for the most alluring and instantly gratifying form of
expression ”a fast, natural art form for a fast, tough, uncaring society ”many
of the greatest MCs would be writers of fiction. No better short stories can
be written about the happenings in the ‘hood than Tupac’s heart wrenching
"Brenda’s Got a Baby" or Jay-Zs masterful "Meet the Parents." How about
Scarface’s "A Minute to Pray and a Second to Die" or Slick Rick’s
"Children’s Story"? These third person narratives are visual, charged with
emotion, and layered with complexity. As for first person rap stories, few
are as vibrant and engaging as
Will Smith's early hits like "Parent’s Just
Don’t Understand" or even "Nightmare On My Street". Even recently, Lupe
Fiasco’s "Hip Hop Saved My Life," delivers a well-told story of a young
father working toward his big break, dreaming of providing adequately for
his family.
Hip Hop’s best artists are modern day American griots. The authentic masters
of the art form are the contemporaries I had been looking for. There is a
strong correlation between the significant decline of literary works
produced by young black men and the creation of Hip Hop in the late 70s.
William Faulkner said, "A writer needs three things: experience,
observation, and imagination — any two of which, at times any one of which — can supply the lack of the others." For a number of reasons, would-be, young
black fiction writers turned to telling stories through rhymes instead of
the longsuffering and painstaking process of learning to craft stories on
the page. This explains the near thirty-year decline in literary production
by young black men, but it does not provide a solution for filling the
existing void. By no means is Hip Hop music sufficient in replacing
contemporary works of literature produced by young black men. The emergence
of Hip Hop music demonstrates the literary want, the genius, emanating from
the most underserved communities. Yet, even with this brilliance, musical
genres fade and art forms should support not replace one another. Today, in
many black communities the children, boys in particular, are not receiving
the proper support and encouragement regarding literacy. The effects are
detrimental, causing regression and other sinister occurrences. To encourage
the reading and writing of books is to encourage evolution. A good book
demands thought and feeling like no other art form and thoughtful writing
has always enriched the whole of a civilized society. We must continue to
find creative and engaging ways to introduce the wonders of reading and
writing to black children of underserved communities. A society falls with
the failings of its less fortunate people. With
s.m.i.l.e.’s publication, I
hope to add to America’s cross-cultural storytelling tradition, which was
fortified by those who inspired me, those storytellers in literature and in
Hip Hop.