The Elements of Style
Excerpt
In the final chapter of The Elements of Style, E. B. White provides a list of guidelines to help writers develop a distinctive and effective voice. These are not rigid rules of grammar, but rather a philosophy for better communication.
- Place yourself in the background: Write in a way that draws attention to the sense and substance of the writing, rather than to the mood and temper of the writer.
- Write in a way that comes naturally: Use words and phrases that come to you spontaneously, but do not mistake casualness for lack of care.
- Work from a suitable design: Even a simple outline can prevent a piece of writing from becoming a mere series of sentences.
- Write with nouns and verbs: Adjectives and adverbs should be used sparingly. The strength of a sentence lies in its nouns and verbs.
- Revise and rewrite: Very few writers are so gifted that they can produce a perfect manuscript on the first try.
- Do not overwrite: Rich, ornate prose is often hard to digest. Avoid the temptation to use "fancy" words when simpler ones will do.
- Do not overstate: When you overstate, the reader will be on guard, and your credibility will diminish.
- Avoid the use of qualifiers: Words like rather, very, little, and pretty are the "leeches that infest the pond of prose, sucking the blood of words."
- Do not affect a breezy manner: True humor and ease come from the subject matter, not from forced "cleverness" in the writing.
- Use orthodox spelling: Avoid "simplified" spellings like thru or nite unless you are writing something highly informal.
- Do not explain too much: Trust your reader. You do not need to describe every facial twitch if the dialogue conveys the emotion.
- Do not construct awkward adverbs: Words like importantly or firstly often clutter a sentence unnecessarily.
- Make sure the reader knows who is speaking: In dialogue, be clear about the speaker so the reader doesn't have to go back and count lines.
- Avoid fancy words: Prefer the familiar word to the far-fetched. Write buy instead of purchase, and help instead of facilitate.
- Do not use dialect unless your ear is good: If you cannot capture the authentic sound of a region or culture, avoid trying to spell it out phonetically.
- Be clear: Clarity is not a "virtue" of writing; it is a duty. If the reader is lost, the writer has failed.
- Do not inject opinion: Unless you are writing an editorial or an essay of opinion, stay focused on the facts of the story.
- Use figures of speech sparingly: A metaphor is like a spice; too much of it can ruin the dish. Avoid mixed metaphors (e.g., "The ship of state is flying through the air").
- Do not take shortcuts at the expense of clarity: Avoid initials and acronyms (like NASA or NATO) unless you are certain the reader knows them.
- Avoid foreign languages: Use English whenever possible. Do not use a French phrase if an English one exists that says the same thing.
- Prefer the standard to the offbeat: Use language that has stood the test of time rather than the latest slang or jargon.
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Copyright © 1999 Pearson/William Strunk Jr. and E. B. White. No part of this excerpt may be reproduced or reprinted without permission from the publisher or author.