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I am writing to request that "Lift Every Voice and Sing" be made the official national anthem of the United States of America. Although "The Star-Spangled Banner" has been the national anthem since 1931, there is growing debate about whether it should be replaced with a more inclusive and representative anthem.
"Lift Every Voice and Sing" was written in 1900 and is often referred to as the "Black National Anthem." Its lyrics celebrate the struggle and perseverance of African Americans, but also speak to the American experience as a whole. The song's message of unity and resilience is more inclusive than "The Star-Spangled Banner," which has been criticized for its racist and exclusionary lyrics.
The lyrics of "Lift Every Voice and Sing" invite all Americans to join in the celebration of freedom and justice: "Lift every voice and sing, till earth and heaven ring, ring with the harmonies of liberty." The song acknowledges the struggles and triumphs of all Americans, stating: "We have come over a way that with tears has been watered, we have come treading our path through the blood of the slaughtered."
In conclusion, I urge you to introduce a bill to make "Lift Every Voice and Sing" the official national anthem of the United States of America. Its lyrics are more inclusive, celebrate struggles and triumphs, and promote a message of unity and resilience that speaks to the American experience. Thank you for your consideration.
Sincerely,